Very Nice! It helped a lot that you added color to the rainbow and the mini characters around it! The placement of the logo is also better than the last poster. Somehow it would be nice to bring out the drop shadow effect from the heart and place it somewhere else. The heart really pops out at the viewer which is intended, but perhaps it doesn't flow as well with the rest of the poster. Maybe just repeating a mini heart that looks like that somewhere else will solve the problem. Overall very nice!
I like that you're not using the sketchy stuff anymore. and the new type. I would brighten up the heart. It looks a little dull next to the drawing. (color wise, anyway)
It looks fantastic I really like the new drawing style, it works quite nicely. Only now the one sketchy swirl stands out a lot, because it doesn't relate to the rest of the poster anymore. Also I realize that you changed the color of back in the arts to subdue it a little more, but could you make it more grey than purple/maroon? The only other thing that you might want to consider is making your body copy just a tad darker grey.
The first time I read the poster I read: "We put the back in the arts." Just thought you might like to see what people might read it as. The illustration was good, but I think the swirl in the bottom left stands out to much. Maybe add some color in it or take it out. Can't wait to see the changes on Monday.
This looks great! The coloring of the illustrations is really working nicely. I want to see "we put the" and "back in the arts" in a different typeface though. It doesn't feel as fluid as the illustrations and I think the two should relate and compliment each other. I don't think you need the swirl at the bottom it forms a triangle with paragraph and the logo and I think the three are competing right now. Try making the logo a tad smaller.
I really like your idea and think your illustration looks great! The only thing that bothers me is the swirl under arts. It doesn't seem to fit in with the rest of the illustrations. I think either adding color to it, or just taking it out would solve this problem! I really like your font choice!
I think the colored illustrations look much better, but now the heart itself is getting a little lost. I think you just need to find a way to bring it out more against the illustrations. I still don't like this type, it makes me think of graffiti with the "e" and the "i" (eeek!)
I love the color you have added to the illustrations! Working much better. Just finish coloring that swirl under the arts part or take it out. The handmade heart needs more contrast so we can appreciate it too!
Not going to repeat comments, the only thing that I can see it the heading to the paragraph. If 'PEOPLE' could line up with the end of the line below it that would be nice. Really nice work, this package fits very well.
I like how the more finished colors tie in with your logo better. And I know it must have been hard for you to take out that bottom cloud person, but your logo works much better over there. The color in that upper left swirl overlapping on top of the felt heart bothers me a little bit. I'm not sure you intended it to do that.
Very Nice! It helped a lot that you added color to the rainbow and the mini characters around it! The placement of the logo is also better than the last poster. Somehow it would be nice to bring out the drop shadow effect from the heart and place it somewhere else. The heart really pops out at the viewer which is intended, but perhaps it doesn't flow as well with the rest of the poster. Maybe just repeating a mini heart that looks like that somewhere else will solve the problem. Overall very nice!
ReplyDeleteI like that you're not using the sketchy stuff anymore. and the new type. I would brighten up the heart. It looks a little dull next to the drawing. (color wise, anyway)
ReplyDeleteIt looks fantastic I really like the new drawing style, it works quite nicely. Only now the one sketchy swirl stands out a lot, because it doesn't relate to the rest of the poster anymore. Also I realize that you changed the color of back in the arts to subdue it a little more, but could you make it more grey than purple/maroon? The only other thing that you might want to consider is making your body copy just a tad darker grey.
ReplyDeleteThe first time I read the poster I read: "We put the back in the arts." Just thought you might like to see what people might read it as. The illustration was good, but I think the swirl in the bottom left stands out to much. Maybe add some color in it or take it out. Can't wait to see the changes on Monday.
ReplyDeleteThis looks great! The coloring of the illustrations is really working nicely. I want to see "we put the" and "back in the arts" in a different typeface though. It doesn't feel as fluid as the illustrations and I think the two should relate and compliment each other. I don't think you need the swirl at the bottom it forms a triangle with paragraph and the logo and I think the three are competing right now. Try making the logo a tad smaller.
ReplyDeleteI really like your idea and think your illustration looks great! The only thing that bothers me is the swirl under arts. It doesn't seem to fit in with the rest of the illustrations. I think either adding color to it, or just taking it out would solve this problem! I really like your font choice!
ReplyDeleteI think the colored illustrations look much better, but now the heart itself is getting a little lost. I think you just need to find a way to bring it out more against the illustrations. I still don't like this type, it makes me think of graffiti with the "e" and the "i" (eeek!)
ReplyDeleteI love the color you have added to the illustrations! Working much better. Just finish coloring that swirl under the arts part or take it out. The handmade heart needs more contrast so we can appreciate it too!
ReplyDeletevery nice color makes it really pop!
ReplyDeleteNot going to repeat comments, the only thing that I can see it the heading to the paragraph. If 'PEOPLE' could line up with the end of the line below it that would be nice. Really nice work, this package fits very well.
I like how the more finished colors tie in with your logo better. And I know it must have been hard for you to take out that bottom cloud person, but your logo works much better over there. The color in that upper left swirl overlapping on top of the felt heart bothers me a little bit. I'm not sure you intended it to do that.
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